How's My Driving?

[peacefulwinter]

How am I playing Winter? She's a little bit crazier than my usual, so I'm always open to feedback, positive or negative. Please leave me comments, suggestions, or anything else that needs to get to me. Comments are screened and anon is on. Please be warned that anonymous comments may be unscreened once I've replied to them, partly so I can make sure you can see the reply, and partly to reduce the number of people making the same comment.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

Hello again, I'm the anon that left crit about your Vegas plot. I noticed you replied to the other anon about their crit. I'm not sure if you didn't get the crit I left before, or hadn't gotten around to replying to it, so I wanted to nudge you again. I'm concerned about how and why a school is letting a group of underage students travel across the country to stay in Las Vegas by themselves for a length of time. This doesn't make sense to me, and I'd like further explanation on why they don't have a chaperone.

Thank you, and I hope to hear back from you.

[peacefulwinter]

It looks I replied to it and forgot to unscreen it... that's totally my bad. I'll unscreen this one. I'm getting used to having people actually reply my HMD, so I'm still learning the buttons.

Anyway! In the original reply, I'd mentioned that Winter was winging the whole thing almost as much as I was, and so it never occurred to her. The idea I came up with then was that she'd try to find someone for about a week, and then would give up and ask her father to do it. Since then, there's been quite a bit more planning IC and OOC, and everything seems to be working out. I didn't find an actual player character of age, so Winter's father is chaperoning (with me NPCing him). By StE's rules I have a nontrivial amount of control for him to step in if something is actually happening to the students, so that should cover things in both an in-character sense as well as an out-of-character sense.

I hope that addresses the question? And sorry for the delay!